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Yang XiaoLong- Posts : 4
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Join date : 2017-07-17
Time to Make Dat Money (Yang)
Mon Jul 17, 2017 1:44 pm
Name: Yang Xiao Long
Biography Link: https://lit-dreamer.rpg-board.net/t13-the-blonde-bombshell-yang-xiao-long
Link to thread for evaluation: https://lit-dreamer.rpg-board.net/t18-time-to-make-dat-money-yang-s-mission
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Biography Link: https://lit-dreamer.rpg-board.net/t13-the-blonde-bombshell-yang-xiao-long
Link to thread for evaluation: https://lit-dreamer.rpg-board.net/t18-time-to-make-dat-money-yang-s-mission
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KazAdmin- Posts : 27
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Join date : 2017-07-14
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Location : United Kingdom 
Re: Time to Make Dat Money (Yang)
Wed Jul 19, 2017 2:13 pm
An excellent story that considered the extra parameters properly and added an original twist. Despite a few grammatical and punctuation errors dotted around the thread, it was very well done and brought out the character you described in the biography. For your efforts; as well as the bonus 10 EXP, you have been awarded with 15 EXP as well.
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